Interesting story. I like the flow. Even though it doesn't hang, I enjoy it. Conversations and stories that are very close to real life so readers will be very easy to dissolve and this story. We also often find things like this in the story, how to lose funds and we don't know how to complain.
We also often see fake smiles. When we are given a smile just to be stale as if we were being hugged while stabbed by a dagger.

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