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RE: Your EVERY word matters!

in #blog7 years ago

Wonderful article.. i was bullied a lot when i was in high school.. i grew and rose above the hate. One should be careful because our “casual” bullying might end up creating hell for someone..

Just one tip for you as an author : the article was awesome. I loved it.. i would humbly suggest that you should work on your formatting. The same article with proper formatting can get you a lot of visibility.. add visual aids between paragraphs to make your post stand out. Use headers to seperate different paras. Use introduction and conclusion headers to let the readers know what the article is about.

As far as the content goes, that was superb.. you have a way with words and let me tell you right now that you will be a huge success on steemit in future.. much regards

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Thanks a lot, and yes, I still am an amateur, I only recently started writing, and am still working on it, thank you for the input, it means a lot. I will most definitely work on my formatting and read up on how to get better. Thanks again! <3