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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance.
Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.5/10 |
Your built up was a little longer but it is a beautiful story indeed minus the initial phase. In fact, few lesser words in the end and beginning would take this story right on top.
I feel the twist you added in the end lessened the fictional effect. It kind of felt forced.