You Lost Me! [ Poetry ]

in #busy8 years ago (edited)

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Who is r.h Sin?

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To the women who spent this year trying to piece themselves back together. i hope 2018 is kind to you and i hope your heart begins to see the benefit of no longer being in the hands of the person who refused to give you everything you deserve by R.H Sin

Yours @mammasitta

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what is the use of busy tag here? Can you please explain about it?

I made a so called quick post on my iPhone and This tag shows up automatically. I am not in the mood to write more on that one to let people feel and think about it.

Try @busy.org for your articles or quick microblog

I later edited and added more tags.

I liked that poem, short simple to the point and so so easy for people to misunderstand. And the comments to your post, I must say they are, well some are quite interesting. I really loved the Micro-blogging comment. No one owns the Busy tag, what's wrong with using it, It's a very cool short poem, you were busy you made a quicky post, what does not spell busy about that. if busy org wants a tag they can claim busyorg, but not busy. Lots of people, hit busy times, like you did and want a quick post.

Any way hello, and I do like that poem, and I do feel it to be a simple easy to to misread and the author most likely knew that.

Hahahah! Totally!

That’s why I was curious what replies I would get

Your comment hit the top position!

Just being lazy 🙈

This one I like even better 😝

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Now that one just made me laugh.

Yesterday I got this reply on another platform

Um..of course I don't agree. Women were born to ...tell a man "shut the fuck up" when he's talking out of his ass. "Slow down when he's going to fast". "You are so smart, why are we in this mess?" and finally, when he's so full of himself, she can say.."I've seen bigger".....

Made me laugh out loud once again:)

You are collecting a post worth of these little tidbits, that was funny.

Isn’t it amazing that it’s possible to spread just a few words and how many different interpretations did I get ?

Luv it!

Sometimes we don’t always have to write that much to get vibrations flowing

I was kind of surprised that just because you shared it, that a lot of people thought it had just, like the day of posting, had happened to you, the one interpretation, out of several that could be read into it.

98 comments, so 50 that are not you or me or re-answers. So 20 different views, I'm not sure, a lot, let's leave it at that, a lot...for one incomplete line...the guy/gal is a genius.

It is amazing

Those lines! We all can relate to them, maybe at different times of our lives. We are human after all:)
That’s truly amazing indeed!
The poet is a man and especially women adore him. I am not surprised.

I share... Dear women, you must not be afraid to start again, forget about those who treated you without due respect. You all deserve to be cared like princesses.

Hahha and Diva’s

You nearly hit the top today 🤩with such charming comment because it was all about those replies.

I was taught this way. But you know how I think, it takes love and respect towards everyone, women even more.

You remember Diva, I'm glad. This confirms how much you are a star :).

Good morning sunshine on another grey winterday! You are for sure one of those bright lights 😉 and all smart and pretty girls right after you.


"something stopped in neutral ... and that silence was so great ...
so immense the lack of love ...I loved you, I loved you and I'm not sure what happened". "you lose me and I give you for lost". Fito Paez.

Gracias!!!!
That song !!!
Wow!

Dear @mammasitta, I am sorry to have seen this publication so late, although I do not look for credits, I just want to accompany you from a distance. The poem may be short, but deep, and although they gave you many points of view, I will only tell you that you can not miss who never had you. Women like you will never be alone, the road will always lead you to happiness, even if it takes a little longer. Today I send you two affectionate hugs, one for yesterday and one for today, and even if you do not see me here, you know that in my mind you will always be associated with this community as a special, intelligent and wonderful person. "Only with the heart can you see well, what is essential is invisible to the eyes". The little Prince. Antoine Saint-Exupéry. Best regards.

Their loss
Your gain
Forgive them and yourself and it’s all sunshine after 💜

And.....we still stay strong with our head wide up and keep on walking 👠

I appreciate brevity. And beauty.

This has it all, for me. :)

Your flash poetry reminded me to r.h Sin a little bit

I consider it an honor. :)

You both are blessed

HUG

That’s exactly what I needed! 🙏

right. this is my heart word. he lost me but i lost nothing. he lost his world & i find my world.

Word up young Lady!
That’s why I posted such simple poem
A reminder for everybody!
We still stand strong
Right?
🙌

absloutly right buddy. this is good one for reminder.

So sad that so many people have such low self-esteem, they fail to see things like that!

Exactly my thoughts! There is not much more to say 😉 today.
You just read my mind