Faded
Space sense says to the eyes
Regarding the wound that fades the color
Reflect from the time dipengujung twilight
Started from a disappointed incision
Immediately silent
Blindly blink soul
Lara came without speaking
Love is lost without light bias
End this memory
I tried to forget
About shared desire
It's pretty faded
As a nostalgic memory
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