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RE: CineAtlas 60 | Week 1 — One Take Intro | [St. Josephine Bakhita Catholic Church JIkwoyi]
Evaluation — CineAtlas 60 (Week 1: One Take Intro)
Post: @woka-happiness — “St. Josephine Bakhita Catholic Church, Jikwoyi”
Evaluation Summary (Week 1)
| Criteria (Rubric /10) | Score | Short comments |
|---|---|---|
| 1) Weekly rule respected (One Take + 20–60s + required links) / 3 | 2.9 / 3.0 | One-take is confirmed by reviewers, and both required links are provided (Speem.watch + YouTube). Small deduction for minor uncertainty on duration/format details not shown in the excerpt. |
| 2) Story clarity & creativity / 2 | 1.3 / 2.0 | Clear reason (Station of the Cross / prayer). Could add a stronger “first frame” hook. |
| 3) Video execution (framing, stability, sound clarity) / 2 | 1.2 / 2.0 | Strong peaceful visuals; sound was muted (confirmed), reducing immersion. |
| 4) SteemAtlas pin quality (relevant description + correct location) / 1 | 1.0 / 1.0 | Pin + coordinates + place name are present and clear. |
| 5) Presentation (stills/screenshots, clean structure) / 1 | 0.8 / 1.0 | Clean and readable; could add more stills/structure polish. |
| 6) Engagement (Shot Breakdown comments on others) / 1 | 0.0 / 1.0 | No proof links to two Shot Breakdown comments included in the excerpt. |
Final Score: 7.2 / 10
General Comment
A good Week 1 “first frame”: a real public place with a calm spiritual mood and clear motivation. To score higher, keep ambient sound on (check mute before recording), add 1–2 lines that sharpen the story mood, and include two direct links to your Shot Breakdown comments for full engagement points.