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RE: Selective Vision (A Constrained Writing Entry)
I don't like him. He seems vain. I almost thought, like the antichrist in the four horsemen. Plus with the white car...
She needs to not hunger for him.
Great writing! :)
Ooo I like how you see the other side to this, to me she is just not worth the attention.
Thank you very much <3
I'm glad you're ok with my comment I worried it came off rude!
These are great characters and you wrote it very immersively that's why I became "fired up" haha