Hi, @prydefoltz :D I really liked tis piece. Here's my comment on your post:

This made me laugh:
"make sure the crescendo
of your cha-ching
overwhelms the cut
of your bustle"
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It's wise advice, but we know gamblers are sick with greed and luck.
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Besides its clever irony, I loved the rhythm helped by the layout in this piece, too. It allowed me to make little pauses to picture the gestures of the speaker.
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This poem of a game speaks the truth of life.
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Loved it, @prydefoltz :D