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RE: Haiku Saturday, Round 10, Contest and Community Building

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Hi, @prydefoltz ☻ Thanks for hosting every week ♥

Here's my comment on your post:

It does look like fire. Both versions are awesome. I kind of prefer your mentioning the name of the flower, but that's just my thing for flower names.
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Lovely hot, @prydefoltz

Begonias illuminated with beauty. Congratulations pryde.

succulent
could miss scent
of water

Both, beautiful! Gems!
If I must choose, I prefer the mystery offered by the first version. That vibrant metaphor that fills confusing connections with various associations, all with meaning in the magic of mastered haiku. Splendid, Pryde!

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