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RE: Creative Writing – 'The Gallery'
I loved reading through they story, it's a beautiful one! Funny how Sarah's prep about speaking confidently and intelligently were overtaken by her insecurities but well, she did speak honestly about it and that is great. I think Mike is a great guy...
Do you plan on continuing the story?
Yes – I get the sense that Sarah started drinking the wine (even though she doesn't normally like wine) because she wanted to lose her inhibitions just a little bit: just enough that she could feel relaxed and comfortable when speaking to Mark. But she ended up drinking more than she had intended, and saying all sorts of things she hadn't planned to say, at all. 😂
Oh yes, I'll definitely continue the story. I think Sarah and Mark are so cute together. I'd love to continue working on their story and seeing what the future holds for them. Thanks for stopping by, @audreybits. 😊
😀😀 yeah yeah... Those things she wanted to keep hidden inside of her but I am glad her honesty (even though under an influence) didn't push him away, it seems like it made him to be more into her... Sure, they seem so cute together... Will definitely love to read more..