Ah, someone is paying attention! I will have too see if I can mirror the image! On Diaspora (another free social media I have used for some years) there was a guy who pointed out that the Lays crisps (shown on page 20) are called Walker's crisp in Britain. So I have to redraw that too - I want all details to be right.

I was actually thinking a lot about the last image for exactly this reason. The truth is that it is somewhere on the motorway A40 where the left and right tracks are separated because of the hills. (You can see it here). I wanted to make it clearer that it was a motorway and not a small road (which would make both the Land Rover and Phill's car drive in the wrong lane. So I tried to place a car closer to the Land Rover of Judith "005" Gunn, but it became too much of a distraction. I also tried to move the Land Rover to the left, but then it shadowed for Phill's car in the foreground. So in the end I just made it as it is.

I'll send a new page 14, as soon as I finish.