|| Original Recorded Poem (Steemit Exclusive): "Your Silence" ||
# "Such a clamour of the abyss/Fighting its way out/In catatonic cacophany/In sudden, stabbing bursts of dark, dampened rage[...]
Written for a friend in serious grief a few years back.
Hope it resonates.
xx,
Kay
I would love some help. While I'm doing okay in terms of getting some attention on my posts, I'm not reaching as many people as I would hope to be, and compared to others doing a similar kind of thing, and I don't really know why. Is it as simple as not using the bots? It's not really about the money as it's hard not to be content with the success I've recently enjoyed, but as an artist, there is an ache to reach a lot more people with one's work, and that doesn't seem to be happening or improving. Any tips, friends? Is there something I'm doing wrong? Is it the kind of content? I'm curious because the people who respond seem really excited about what I'm doing, but it's like I can't get beyond a certain number in terms of exposure, and I'd like to fix that if it's in my power to do so. Very open to thoughts and suggestions, and I will do my best to check out your blogs in return! xx
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- "Take a Picture" (song): dsound.audio/#!/@kayclarity/20180424t224918755z-steemit-original-song-take-a-picture
- "Penny Tears" (original) steemit.com/dsound/@kayclarity/20180427t225658170z-steemit-exclusive-penny-tears-live-open-mic-audio
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You poem is good, this particular one resonates with a past experience i wouldn't wanna talk about right now, however concerning you not reaching the number you are looking for i vehemently believe is only a matter of time so long as you continue to be genuine it will reach the masses. Steemit community as i know it is all about support. I'm gonna follow you so i can share your posts with my friends and followers
Thanks for your support and encouragement, and I'm glad to hear it resonated with you.
You're welcome
This piece is so lovely and amazing, the picture depict a simple part of people life. As someone heading at no specific destination and life really does entailed
Hello Kay, I thought you might share the entire poem as written on your post because not everybody speaks English as natives. If somebody doesn't know a word on a line it would be very hard for him/her to focus on it. By the way your poem reminded me a friend who also lost her mother. It is a silent ultimatom itself, loved it :)
Thank you, friend! Yes, from the beginning I had wanted to, but dsound sometimes acts up and the lyrics don't post well, and for a poem--it kind of destroys it if the structuring/spacing isn't right!
But it seems to be better these days (I experimented on Saturday), so I might try doing that more now.
I agree with you, arranging a post on dsound can be very frustrating I've experienced it on my first post as well. But If you prepare your post on Steemit and copy it you can edit it on steemit after posting on Dsound. I think it is the easiest way to do it.
That's actually a great idea. Sometimes the formatting just doesn't go through, however.. kinks I'm sure they are working on, however!