This is a solid post, however, I cannot accept it as an assignment for revenue split today, because you did not use either the #dolphinschool or #markrmorrisjr tags, and that cannot be corrected in edit. It wouldn't be fair for those that did. For day 2, please include those. I like your use of imagery, and the music itself is fascinating. As a music theater director, I loved how the two voices are used as primary instruments, allowing the lyrics to come front, without it feeling immediately Broadway. Great review of the piece and excellent writing. I also like your use of a link to your ideal followers work. If your tags were correctable, this would be a candidate for the revenue share post.