Will you be there?

in #dsound7 years ago (edited)

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I usually think better when I am walking.

I recorded the poem before writing it so it is totally natural and impromptu. You might be able to guess my story if you listen @dsound. The poem is read and nature itself together with the sounds of the city. It sounds like I added sound effects but there are no side effects. This is a one shot recording off the top of my head.



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Original Poem @mineopoly

Will You Be There?

Heavy footsteps
Pound
In anticipation
Where will you be?
I have no guarantee
When you will
Be there again

Friends greet on the street
Saying, “Hi! Nice to meet you.”
I wonder if one will be there.

Last spring I met and waited in the Mongolian dust
Sparsity
Could hardly reach him
Summer sprouted
Flowers in bloom
Sweltering heat
Humidity of doom

Waiting and footsteps
Walking
To meet him
Leaves fell off the trees
And seasons past
I knew this wouldn’t last

I waited and he came
The winter breeze blew in
The first signs of snow
Reminded me
That all my guilt and shame
Was washed away again

All winter I met him
He came
And one day he wasn’t there
Was not the same.

Once again,
Heavy footsteps
Waiting in anticipation.
Will you be there?



The poem is a spiritual journey getting closer and then losing touch. It is also the story of a student who is now in college. I really tried hard to visit him today. I couldn't meet him and I hope that he is OK.

Verse of the Day/ Revelation 3:20

"I stand at the door and knock."

Mineopoly Quote:

Thank you for opening this door to me.

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Woodstock source. All other pictures here are public domain or a creation of @mineopoly

QTTA: (QUESTION TO THINK ABOUT)

What are you waiting for?

I love you all.

For amazing adventure in English please follow @mineopoly mining the heart.



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Correct me if I'm wrong but this is the 3rd poem I entered in the Steemitschool poetry competition.
Steemitschool Discord https://discord.gg/hyfYQ9P.

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