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RE: Becoming Frillless Smoke [Day 38]

in #dsound8 years ago

sweet-word-spinner,
your porcelain fingers slip through my grasp
into the stratosphere—
while I remember, embering here:
sharp smoke in the moist godessship
of spring amongst moss and stone

My goodness but you have a lovely and picturesque imagination. You had drawn in words the photo before I say it. Lovely:)

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Thank you for reading and for the kind words @prydefoltz :-)