Steemit Openmic semana 117-Sillon by Adolfo Rivas - Original song @adolforivas42 (no valido para openmic)

in #dtube5 years ago (edited)

Feliz Navidad estimados amigos, por aca compartiendo mi nueva publicacion de esta semana. Esta es una de mis nuevas canciones y se titula "Sillon". Espero les guste!.

Merry christmas my dear friends, I am sharing my new entry for this week. This is one of my original brand new song named "Sillon" (in english "armchair").I hope you like it!.

Quiero agradecer a todos los administradores y jueces quienes hicieron mencion de mi paritipacion la semana pasada,@luzcypher,@pfunk,@isaria, @krystle, @verbal-d, @meno,@ausbitbank y a todos los demas muchisimas gracias, y reciban de igual manera una feliz navidad!.

I want to thank to all administrators and judges who named me about my participation the lasrt week, @luzcypher,@pfunk,@isaria, @krystle, @verbal-d, @meno,@ausbitbank and the other ones, thank you very much, and merry christmas to you as well!.

Sillon By Adolfo Rivas

En el mismo sillon
Tomando cafe
Mirando el reloj ya son las tres
recordando palabras...
Mirando nuestros ojos fuerte

En el mismo sillon
donde te bese, donde nuestras almas se fundieron
en un solo cuerpo
Y todo eso es un sueño

Me hundo en este vago rincon
de vil melancolia.
Mirando hacia atras donde estan nuestros silencios
Se que duele.
Quiero pensar que estoy donde quiero estar
pero se que no puedo
A partir de ahora me toca mirar
hacia adelante
hacia adelante

Aun puedo sentir
en el mismo lugar
el calor de tu cuerpo siento
El aire me parece tan denso
NO me deja respirar tan facil

Puedo saborear
en la brisa pasar
LA fragancia que exudan nuestros cuerpos
y solo despierto...
Esto no es real...

Me hundo en este vago rincon
de vil melancolia.
Mirando hacia atras donde estan nuestros silencios
Se que duele.
Quiero pensar que estoy donde quiero estar
pero se que no puedo
Eres historia y me toca mirar hacia adelante
hacia adelante

En otro sillon
tomaste cafe
miraste el reloj ya son las tres
besando silencios
con tu mirada a ras del suelo...

English:

Couch By Adolfo Rivas

In the same couch
Drinking coffee
Looking at the clock, it's already three o'clock
remembering words ...
Looking at our eyes strong

In the same couch
where I kissed you, where our souls melted
in one body
And all that is a dream

I sink in this vague corner
of vile melancholy.
Looking back where our silences are
I know it hurts.
I want to think, that I am where I want to be
but I know I can not do it
From now, I have to look
forward
forward

I can still feel
In the same place
the heat of your body I feel
The air seems so dense
It does not let me breathe so easily

I can taste
in the breeze
the fragrance that our bodies exude
and I'm just awake ...
This is not real...

I sink in this vague corner
of vile melancholy.
Looking back where our silences are
I know it hurts.
I want to think that I am where I want to be
but I know I can not
You are history and I have to look forward
forward

In another couch
you took coffee
You looked at the clock and it's three o'clock
kissing silences
with your eyes at ground level ...

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Really cool music, I enjoyed it. Thanks a lot. I love to listen to more of such great music. Music is making my soul feel better. ☺♪♫

Good music and good moments... congratulations my friend. Greetings from Venezuela.

Gracias estimado máster!!
Feliz navidad!. Saludos y éxitos!!

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