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RE: The darkness of the night!. Fifty-word short story.

in #esteem • 7 years ago

I really enjoyed this 50-word story, @felixgarciap. I think it is your best one yet. You've incorporated some important elements: a character, a scene, a conflict, a story arc (the witch begging God to help her) and something of a resolution (the night refusing to help her).

It is very difficult to get all of these elements into a 50-word story! Well done. (Be sure to add a period after the last sentence.)

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     7 years ago 

    Thank you very much @jayna for your evaluation of my story of the witch. Receive my affections .

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