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RE: "Wordsmiths Fiction Week 2: Season 24 – The Envelope"

in #fiction-s24wk28 months ago (edited)

Hello @rossnenye

Thank you so much for taking part in Week-2 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

CriteriaMarks
Story Setting & World-Building2/3
Theme & Message2/2
Formatting & Presentation1.75/2
Originality & Uniqueness2.5/3
Total8.25/10

Feedback
• Wow friend,!!! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for realizing a real situation, you have very accurately depicted the mental state and anxiety of a person in such a special time.

• I also liked the happy ending of your story, actually it happens many times when a child is not seen by his father, then the mother ends all the questions by telling just one lie instead of telling him new lies every day. Perhaps Diego's mother understood his childish mind in the same way and got rid of his questions

• .Our heartfelt best wishes to you dear friend.

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Thank you so much for your review.