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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project.
Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-1: The Office Project
Dear @wlin Here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | It was a great idea |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Original |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 1/1 | A great team work by hackers |
| Total | 9.8/10 |
Actually the hackers did all the teamwork on Dr. Carolds Burks' achievements and on her computer. It was a great team work even if unethical and for money.
The Twin Corporation was entitled for the benefits as they funded the Project but I wonder how they treated Nakary and Roman who had the data in their hidden USB. Did they snatch the drive or let them keep the money or they took everything back?
Greetings @dove11.
When writing the end of the story, I wanted to leave the fate of the hackers unknown, thinking about the Thriller effect of the story; and of course, also to maybe expand it in the future. I feel that 800 words limited me a bit in the development and ending, but that was part of the demands and the challenge that I gladly accepted when I read the contest announcement.
Thank you for your appreciation and evaluation of my story. I will be attentive to the new call for entries.
I have to bring this rule into play because it tests the ability of contestant to show their ability within limited words, I don't have to read novels besides I have to check them thoroughly. Evey community has their rules for instance some even need a translation in English otherwise they disqualify even the best entry.Rules are rules and one should participate where he feels comfortable. I respect your respect for rules. After all we have our own limitations, time limit, etc.
Maybe I didn't express correctly what I was trying to say. The rules are very clear and excellent, they are not always the same in other places. It was me who, being my first participation in the Steemit Challenge, noticed my own limitation. It was not a complaint about the rules that I tried to express, but on the contrary it was a recognition of my own limitation as a writer, which I did not know I had, but thanks to these contests I will be able to strengthen it.
I know and my answer was not aimed at you, cheers!