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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project
Dear @samuelbrilliant, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.75/1 | The ending focused more on corporate redemption than on wider social impact or lingering mystery. |
| Total | 9.55/10 |
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- You pulled me into the story from the first line, and I stayed hooked until the end. I just wish you had stretched the tension in the middle, made the danger feel more tangible, and slowed down the decision-making scene.
Yes, thank you for the review, well I actually did most of the things you mentioned but at the end it exceeded the 800-word limit so I had to cut out some part and even hasten some part, I didn't feel happy but I had to do it, to follow the contest guidelines. Thank you once again for your review.