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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Dear @simonisai15, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.75/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | You clearly tried to align with the prompt, but the ending softened the darker tone that the original narrative suggested. |
| Total | 9.65/10 |
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- You did attempt to expand Ronnie's character by giving him a backstory tied to crime and a new identity, which shows creativity and I can see you tried to fulfill the melodrama requirement, especially with the fake death and redemption twist. Well done!