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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate
Dear @saifuddinmahmud, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Excellent |
| Presentation | 0.75/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.75/1 | You leaned too much on melodrama instead of showing Timothy's real emotions, which weakened the impact. |
| Total | 9/10 |
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- You had a solid base to work with, but your story felt underdeveloped. The suspenseful setup was good, yet you didn't fully explore Timothy's conflict or resolve it in a satisfying way. Ronnie's explanation sounded forced and reduced the mystery instead of deepening it.