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RE: Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate

Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-2: Mysterious Roommate

Dear @jannatakter24, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness3/3Excellent
Presentation0.9/1Good
My observation0.85/1The mask in the locker was a great symbol, but you didn't explain its meaning clearly enough. It left me confused rather than intrigued.
Total9.35/10

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  • The ending didn't feel earned. Instead of mystery, it left me thinking you didn't know where to take Ronnie's character.

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Thank you so much for advice

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