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RE: The Boss's Challenge

in #fiction-s26wk34 months ago (edited)
Steemit Challenge S26-w3 : The Boss's Challenge

Dear @samuelbrilliant , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.3/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Good
Presentation1/1Okay
My observation0.8/1Tough but not as tough.
Total9/10

Feedback

  • It was a job for the experts and it needed work on it but you made it too complicated.

  • Your idea was okay but it lacked touch of fiction but looked more like a project with no solution. This project in fact is easy and well within reach what we are looking for is the right fictional presentation.

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