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RE: The Boss 's Challenge (A Story of Teamwork & Triumph)
Dear @ghazal-safi, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4/5 | Satisfactory |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.75/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.7/1 | Your story read more like a project report or case study than a piece of fiction because of headings. |
| Total | 8.25/10 |
Feedback
- You listed the engineers and their roles almost like a PowerPoint slide. I didn't get to know them as characters, so they felt flat and functional rather than part of a living story.