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RE: The Unlikely Friendship

in #fiction-s26wk416 days ago
Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-4: The Unlikely Friendship

Dear @ , here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.9/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Good
Presentation0.8/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.5/10

Feedback

  • It was a nice theme and responded close to the prompt. Had Tina not over reacted on Dev's way's of signing the bills, this story would be even better.

  • You overshot the word limit by almost 45% which made a difference.

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Thanks very much, this is my first time participating, I will surely do better in the next story.