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RE: Second Chance Romance (Spanish)
Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.5/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Okay |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.2/10 |
You started with an intro which lessened the impact besides the story started at a point which doesn't match the demand of the prompt.
You mostly stayed in the present rather than going back in the flashback and your story projected Jenny rather than taking Denny into the flashback.