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RE: Romance de segunda oportunidad
Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.6/10 |
Your story is almost there but if it concentrated more on Jenny and what happened during the incident, it would be right on top.
I wanted to know more about their relationship issues rather than how Dennis planned to resolve them.