Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @casv, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.7/10 |
- Your story was near perfect up to this point
carcomía la soledad como un cáncer que devoraba su alma, un alma que añoraba el perdón del amor perdido y la redención de una pesada culpa.
- The extension beyond this point took Dennis out of the flashback and lessened the impact.
Gracias amigo por su lectura, valoro su sagaz apreciación.
Feliz día..!