Dear @muzack1, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.4/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | I noticed you repeated certain sentences almost word for word. |
| Total | 9.1/10 |
Feedback
- You gave me a sweet romantic scene, but I have to be honest — it doesn't carry the depth or tension the prompt required. You skipped past Dennis's guilt, his loneliness in a "perfect" life, and the intensity of the workplace argument that originally drove Jenny away.
Thanks you for verification my post.