Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-6: Two-timing
Dear @peachyladiva, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.75/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Okay |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 1/1 | Good |
| Total | 9.65/10 |
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I guess John was ready but he got no response, not the one he he was expecting which turned him into a loyal one.
I feel even if he pretended to be loyal to his wife he was not. I guess a little more drama would take this story right on top.