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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-Timing
Dear @sohag10, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.4/5 | Satisfactory |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | You often summarized events instead of showing actual conversations. |
| Total | 9/10 |
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- I could see the lesson you wanted to highlight, and that gave your story a meaningful touch. At the same time, you diverged from the original Sydney–Canberra background and summarized too much instead of showing through conversations, which made the story feel rushed.
Thank you so much.