I thoroughly enjoyed your fiction story. That was one subject I've never seen written about, so it was a refreshing theme. You did a good job of setting the scene with the different demands that were required for the various species and letting the reader know how diverse the tasks were. Then the resulting chaos from the Immunoflu and the shortage of workers was very believable. You did a great job of telling a complete story within this flash fiction. Even the ending about the parents would be upset if somthing happened to their offspring was right on target.