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RE: Canal - Freewrite Day 116 (And Five Other Freewrites)
These are great! My only complaint is that I want more stories! The man in "California " gave me shivers. I'm telling myself that he had a perfectly good reason for holding a rod and it wasn't anything scary at all. As for the yard sale, I think I would just tell the guy he could have the jug for free right from the beginning.
Scary: like hit her with the rod or carry her into the house and tie her to a chair :)
But actually, he could be a good man and offer to help.
What if you tell the weirdo he can have the jug for free and he immediately asks for another? :)
Lol. I like your imagination. Sometimes, it's just satisfying to let the story hang and allow your readers to create their own ending.
Wish I had gotten to read these stories some days earlier, then my vote would've have counted.