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RE: The End of Imaginary Friends :: A Fantasy Short Story
Amazing story, @negativer. I grieve for Ariana and her mother, and Doggo and Dee. It has been a wonderful and sorrowful journey, seeing this story in its metamorphosis into this beautiful final form.
Thank you so much @jayna. Maybe I can do some kind of followup part 2 where at least some measure of redemption is offered. Thanks for your help on the edits and reads!
Was thinking as I read through this that Arianna would make a great character in a series that starts with this story. Awesome, awesome work. Loved every word, even the one that was missing.
now you have to find it.
Dangit Jon. Tell me where.
The two men in the back insert word here been speaking to each other quietly
Oh, those guys. Doing unspeakable things in the back without proper words.
Thx for noting it. A bazillion edits, and still something sneaks through.
Awesome work, still. I've seen so many people take what could be their greatest blessing and mistaking it for a burden, they destroy it. I love this story.