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RE: The End of Imaginary Friends :: A Fantasy Short Story

in #fiction8 years ago

Was thinking as I read through this that Arianna would make a great character in a series that starts with this story. Awesome, awesome work. Loved every word, even the one that was missing.

now you have to find it.

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Dangit Jon. Tell me where.

The two men in the back insert word here been speaking to each other quietly

Oh, those guys. Doing unspeakable things in the back without proper words.

Thx for noting it. A bazillion edits, and still something sneaks through.

Awesome work, still. I've seen so many people take what could be their greatest blessing and mistaking it for a burden, they destroy it. I love this story.

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