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RE: Canal - Freewrite Day 116 (And Five Other Freewrites)
I agree with @honeydue. You draw the reader in very fast - and quite a few unexpected endings :)
Like: she slipped...
I agree with @honeydue. You draw the reader in very fast - and quite a few unexpected endings :)
Like: she slipped...
Thank you.