What Makes a Great Villain in Fiction?

in #fiction7 years ago

I've always been fascinated about the mechanisms behind storytelling in general. Whether it's books, movies, tv shows, videogames, whatever. Even pro wrestling.

One aspect in particular is an interest of mine, and that is the villain in any given story.

A big reason why a lot of movies fail to impress me much is that the villain's motivations are not given enough depth. Often times the hero is looked deep into, but the villain can simply be evil for the sake of being evil, and that, to me, completely takes the edge off.

If you think of the real world, those that we often perceive as evil may simply have a different perception on things. A greedy capitalist feels that the world simply functions better under a free market, whereas his arch nemesis, the lazy socialist, feels that the world would be better off if the means of production were seized by the state, and the "rewards" were distributed equally, if you don't mind a Steemit joke.

Both are advocating for a specific hard fork, which, yes, would benefit them, but also, in their mind, everybody else.

To both of them, the other is a bad guy, evil, a villain, but in their own mind, of course, they are the hero of the story. Fighting for a better world.

I enjoy stories where this is also the case.

I believe that the best bad guy in fiction is one who believes that he is right, but goes about it the wrong way. We need to be able to sympathize with the motive, but also feel that the means by which he is going about achieving it are wrong, too extreme, or otherwise immoral.

That is something I always look for if I'm enjoying a story of fiction, whatever the medium.

A very good example is a wrestling storyline from 2008 between Chris Jericho and Shawn Michaels.

In pro wrestling, wrestlers are divided into two groups: babyfaces and heels. Babyfaces are the heroes, and heels are the villains. The crowd is supposed to cheer the babyface, and boo the heel. The mechanism is that people will want to pay money to see the babyface vanquish the evil heel. The same dynamic can also be seen all over "real" combat sports, such as boxing orthe UFC. Even though the sports are "real", you can often clearly see who the babyface and who the heel is. And the fights with a strong babyface-heel dynamic are generally the ones that draw the most money.

So, in 2008 Shawn Michaes, the babyface, faked a knee injury to win a match by getting a surprise win over his worried opponent, and then continued to fake the knee injury to avoid facing him again.

Chris Jericho, who was also a babyface at the time, called him out on it, claiming that the injury wasn't real.

No one believed Jericho, and kept on cheering Michaels.

Shawn was later on even able to convince Jericho that the injury was real, gaining his trust, until finally revealing that yes, Jericho was right all along, Shawn is totally fine.

This triggered what is known as a heel turn with Jericho, where he would slowly turn from a good guy to a bad guy, resulting in Jericho attacking Shawn and driving his face through a television screen, resulting in an eye injury.

The key here was that Jericho had been right all along, simply defending the truth, but the crowd still sided with Shawn. Jericho's character turned into a great villain who called himself an honest man and a righteous man, and insulting the fans for being hypocrites and brainless sycophants for siding with a known liar like Shawn Michaels.

It was cool storytelling, and was actually a product of Jericho and Michaels themselves, who are friends in real life. The actual creative team had nothing to do with it.

The interesting dilemma there was that it's not like Jericho did anything wrong. He simply felt Shawn was lying, tried to expose him, then trusted him, got his trust broken, and then turned on him, but instead of being looked at as a hero who exposed a scam artist, he was vilified as the bad guy.

But Jericho was also an ass about it, and that's another key. No matter your principles, if you're an ass, people dislike you. But it's an interesting conflict when the ass is in the right in his convictions, but unlikable at the same time.

A truly good bad guy never considers himself the bad guy. He's not killing people, or threatening to take over the world just for the sake of. He actually considers himself to be the hero.

And then the hero of the story is the voice of reason, but can also be imperfect himself - since the hero needs to be relatable, as well, and we're all imperfect in one way or another - and the villain calls the hero out on these flaws.

In a nutshell, the villain needs to be able to justify his crimes to himself, and then attempt to justify them to the audience.

A good modern day good vs. evil story would be the west vs. islam.

From our point of view, muslims are evil and are all about the destruction of the west, and yes, we are at war with them. And yes, to us, they are the bad guys, and it's silly to claim otherwise.

But it's also vice versa.

Muslims hate what the west represents, and view us as the scum oft the earth that needs to eliminated.

They can justify their actions easily by pointing out the flaws and degenerate nature of the west, and they do make points that are definitely relatable. Just enough points to make us go "Well, that thing he said there is actually true". But the actions themselves are so far beyond our understanding of right and wrong that they clearly become the villains.

I think that if done right, the audience can even feel a sense of sympathy towards the villain.

You can get that he's done just vanilla and evil, there's a driving factor behind the actions that you can relate to. Someone robs a bank. What if his wife is seriously ill, and the family is broke? Is robbing a bank right? No. But you can understand why it's done.

A villain needs to create a moral dilemma within the audience in order to be successful.

In my view, anyway. What do you guys think?

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I think you're right.

There's one other kind of villain that works for me, maybe because I find them the scariest of them all: the amoral villain. The ones like the assassin in The Day of the Jackal or the absurdist? main character in L'Étranger.

These don't really create a moral dilemma, but give you a nasty surprise because somehow you feel such people aren't supposed to exist.

i know nothing of wrestling, so i can't speak to that, but D'Onoffrio's "Kingpin" in the first season of Daredevil was such a good villain because he was a very complex character and written in such a way that you almost take his side in the fight because you understand his motivations and what drives him.

bad guys who are bad just because are super boring and do nothing for a story.

Out of interest, what makes you not want to take his side?

his methodology coupled with the violence. it's obvious he's the bad guy, but he's also given a highly nuanced personality, which makes him not likeable, but at least, in some ways, more relatable. it doesn't excuse his behavior by any means, but you understand it better.

Yup, that's the correct way to do it, in my opinion.

I read a lot and when you have to rely on a bunch of words to create a bigger picture – this issue is even larger. I simply hate it when the characters are just cardboards. If you ask me we are both depending on situation and not solely on attitude.

Hypothetically you and me walk down the path and see a cat tucked in a bag drowning. Hypothetically you don’t really care for cats or care but not enough to jump in. I (the crazy cat lady) wouldn’t probably think twice. In this case I might be the hero and you the villain? Maybe you are just too scared of water to jump in? Now … put me on the sun for about 3h. I’ll show u what a bitch is to kingdom come. :) My sister is a gentle woman, but let her go hungry for some time and you will lose your arm at the end.

Think we all have a few ticks that can drive us to become a villain. Mostly we can all be heroes while our bellies are full … I solve all my issues more or less kindly and via sympathy card. My friend prefers the more aggressive approach. She wears a different label then I do. It is not a nice label. But then again …. Leave us two in the desert for 2 days. I will be anything but kind or sympathetic. :)

A tip I got when I was younger … you wanna know what u made of? Take the basic human needs away (water, food, sleep, etc.) and you will find out who you are. At the end we all villains chained by morals to be heroes. :)
As goes for villains in general….I find the ones with mental disorders the most fascinating. :>

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Regards o/

I think the world doesn't know what evil looks like.

Our movie villains are the town bully, or the asshole.

A true villain looks like Hitlery Klinton.
Where half of a nation voted for her.
While she took money to help out a storm torn country and used it instead to traffic children.

She says one thing to one group, and another thing to another, to get them angry at each other. She manipulates everyone and may be incapable of telling the truth.

But, if you tried to use Hitlery as a villian, half of the audience wouldn't get it.
If you tried to show her lying, and manipulating sides, it would take up all the movie, and most people still wouldn't see her as the bad guy.

She and her husband are the reason why there is a possibility of a nuclear war. Without them selling fissionable materials and missile technology...

There's a lot of truth to this. Great article. What I like most is when a "good" guy isn't all good and a "bad" guy isn't all bad. I feel accomplished in my writing when I make you like a character, but then get a little uneasy about a decision he/she is making or the opposite : when there a "bad guy" and then all of a sudden you like something they are doing. People live in the grey. Good people are not all good and bad people are not all bad. It's not black and white like most society think / believes / wishes it was. Good work here.

Then you're going to love the new netflix show castlevania. Dracula isn't just evil and the show drops imo quite the anarcho bombs here and there about self responsibility and the craze of religion (or supernatural belief at all).

But yeah, let's just keep giving us some entrepreneur who is evil in every cp show ever /s

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I wish someone would create a troll villain

Great post. For sure one aspect of storytelling that gets under looked
sometimes.

I think the role of a villains is to put the hero in a good light.
Regarding the wrestling story, let's be honest, in the real world, Shawn would be the villain. The guy faked an injury to win. That's a heelish thing to do.

True. But Jericho was an unlikable ass. No one wants to cheer an unlikable asshat. And that's the key.

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