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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 1) - The Hours Between 0500 and 0600
Very cool! I had to re-read it, as I kept imagining that the protagonist is a toddler in an orphanage, with fleeting memories of his past life. :)
Close enough! :D Really though, I want readers to view the story through two perspectives: the fantastical world that children see and the reality that every one else sees. I injected passion into this, so I hope it translates just as well as your tales do!