Your 'I want a better ending' on my first version is what took me here, on revision 4. Much thanks for that direction. It's easy to be complacent, comfortable with 'something' until someone comes along and says 'it can be better.'
Aw shucks. Thank you for writing it and for the hard work of editing it. Maybe not everyone will not realize how much work went into this piece. You not only used your prodigious talent, you also rolled up your sleeves and polished and it shows.
Your 'I want a better ending' on my first version is what took me here, on revision 4. Much thanks for that direction. It's easy to be complacent, comfortable with 'something' until someone comes along and says 'it can be better.'
Thank you!
Aw shucks. Thank you for writing it and for the hard work of editing it. Maybe not everyone will not realize how much work went into this piece. You not only used your prodigious talent, you also rolled up your sleeves and polished and it shows.