Fantasy Writing snippet
Action fantasy writing... what do you think of it?
The two enemies locked blades. Shields cast aside, broken and useless.
Guild-forged steel of excellent craftsmanship ground against the opposing blade made of thick slabs of stone-iron, cut in jagged brutal portions.
They’re eyes locked in stares of hatred as they pushed the two axes into each other, each putting as much force behind the blades as possible. Double handed - grips like iron, shoulders locked, spines arched forward and legs braced.
A loss of balance would be followed by a deathblow.