Fiftywords Prompt: Lost

esttyb (50)in #fiftywords • 6 years ago

Trapped between two worlds
No place to hide
She is mocked by all
Young one, when the chips
are down,you are on your own
Fight for sanity, stay strong
Being weak will only make you eaten
Find your own strength
Be the fence between two sides
The untouchable Queen

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6 years ago in #fiftywords by esttyb (50)

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blueteddy (53) 6 years ago

I keep coming back to read this over and over. It's really lovely and has a defiant kind of power to it.

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esttyb (50) 6 years ago

Thanks so much. I am glad you like it.

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jayna (69) 6 years ago

I really enjoyed this story, @esttyb. It was a fun surprise when it switched from being an observation of the young lady to advice for how she should find her own strength. I love this line:

The untouchable Queen

Nice work!

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esttyb (50) 6 years ago

Thanks so much @jayna. Your prompt inspires me to get better with my short stories write-ups.

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