First day of... - Fifty word story Challenge

in #fiftywords7 years ago

She pulled the door and stepped outside to a frosty breeze.

Never before the spring was so reluctant.

Feeling chills to the bone and thinking there is always a way out, was the only way out.

If she could exercise this morning, no other weather would beat her ever again.

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Nicely done!

This is a very interesting line:

Feeling chills to the bone and thinking there is always a way out, was the only way out.

I'm thinking about it, and am not sure what it means, but it is very poetic!

Ok, if you come up with a sort of meaning for it, I want to hear it. Thank you @jayna! very appreciated :)