Wow. I was really slipping in and out of reality, the game and my own projected fears. I FELT that caged in sense of panic - if his brain running hard about waling his mom whilst LIVING that terror, in the moment.
Your ending? LOL. A total surprise. Touche. The light nervous laughter at the end? I wasn't sure if it was me or him. :)
You should write suspense fiction and psycho thrillers more. :)
Thoroughly enjoyed over here in Thailand.
I'm so happy to read your response. It lets me know what I did right. Now, only if I could do this every time, I'd be a genius. lol
I think only a person who enjoys horror humor would laugh at the end. 8-)
We shall see what comes out as I continue the work.