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RE: Ora et Labora - Week #54 of Finish the Story

in #finishthestory7 years ago (edited)

Aww! I'm happy that you took a different tack with your story to give us such a happy ending!

Thanks to you, the sweet Agnes isn't left to the sidelines. We're given a great answer to what happened those months ago and the tenseness of a difficult decision. Strong Father Thoram, though adoring of the girl, is so heartbroken over the necessity of telling the cook to leave that he begs a boon from the nervous Flynn. Torn, we're shown a wonderful and romantic scene where the boy casts aside the previous life plan he's been laboring towards for a future with the girl he loves. I agree with Dirge, a wholesome ending and one to smile about.

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Thanks @bananafish, it was time for one of my stories to have a happy ending.

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