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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #35! My Entry
This is entertaining and picaresque in the purest pirate tradition. I agree with @theironfelix, you could fix some verbs (past perfect/present tense), quoted texts and polishing here and there. Proof-reading will make it brilliant 😉
Ya I am sorry guys I am trying to make sure I do that more often cause I write too often late at night. But I am glad you like the just of the story.
We love you being part of this! Don't worry.. I know how it feels to write late at night 😉