This is the first time I read a writing contest here on Steemit, and I had fun reading it. I like the way how you describe even the minute detail of "rough patchwork of wallpaper." Your image in writing is so vivid, I can touch what Jon touched and I can feel my heart racing as his! Hahaha! 😁
I love your story. Very artistically done. Hope you win in the contest.
I'm so glad you hop on when a quality post of mine came out! haha. Will you come and join us for a "Finish the Story" contest?
I did get carried away with the images myself, and I liked that it pulled you into the scene. I think this is one of my strongest works yet.
Oh no! I am not a writer, and I'm just learning English. Its not my first language. So my English is limited. If I write, I will surely ran out of words. Hahaha! 😂
Yes, I definitely enjoyed your piece. I am hopeful that you nail this contest out! 😊😊
Have a pleasant day. 😊
If you want to do a teamwork entry, let me know. You'll type 300 or so words in your language and then we'll use google translator. I'll edit and add to what you give. After I finish it, I will post it as a collaborative effort entry. I did a thing like this with a Spanish speaker. We had fun. story
Ahaha! That's a great idea. I do not have great imagination to create a story. My ideas are boring. I just enjoy reading, and appreciating others talent in that field! I really envy those people who can write, because I really can't. Hahaha. 😊 I'm sorry. But thank you for the invitation. 😊😁
Should it interest you, this is an amazing book that will open up your natural writing skills. This is one of the best books I've ever gone through.
Oh, I see.. Yeah, I'll gonna try.
haha. Yes, It would be helpful to leave the link instead of testing your mindreading capabilities.
https://www.amazon.com/Writing-Natural-Way-Anniversary-Expanded/dp/0874779618
Haha! Right. Thanks for the link. I'll read it a little later.