thank you cryptomania13; I recently wrote a long post about how to turn the dial up on your posts to 11. Check it out. It's called my tips to successful lifestyle blogging on Steemit. I will try find some time to have a look at your blog, but generally I'm going to read it as enjoyment and not as a constructive critisim exercise. Do feel free to message me on steemit chat if you want to get more personalised advice.