RE: The Abysmal Biscuit (Finish The Story #50 Entry)
haha when i wrote it, it just seems so naturally for her to eat the bones, didn't even realise it was cannibalism until I saw your comment, what has @f3nix done to us lol
I did try and leave it open for the reader to figure out what was going on in that strange possession like compulsion, again i wouldn't have thought of the word possession when i was writing it, but she did undeniably let something in... i had a lot of fun having a breaking point in there and showing her revulsion growing like a bubble, until it pops - gone.
I think i was running down the stairs late one night last week, and I was struck so strongly by the image of her crunching the bones, the shards cutting her mouth, and then she just had to eat them!
thank you very much, highly appreciated <3
