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RE: The Show - Freewrite Day 116
That was a really good scene! I also had to read it a second time to put all the pieces together, nice work.
That was a really good scene! I also had to read it a second time to put all the pieces together, nice work.
Thank you! Looking back at it there's some things I think I would change just to make it a little easier to understand.
That is always the way with these 5 minute freewrites, you just have to let them flow.. But to be honest, I wouldn't change a thing, I really like it when I have think about something as I read it. It's like when you watch a great movie for a second time, and you spot so much more, because you understand more on the second viewing.